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I remember the day I met you
The fair-haired woman who would change my life
We were whisked away to a world unknown to me
You promised to protect me, you the melodist I know
I was afraid but I wasn't alone
I was with the most beautiful girl that night, the melodist I know

I thought you were troublesome,
The way you reprimanded me. As if you knew so much better
I knew you did, but I couldn't accept it,
The soldier girl so much more mature than the young lord

We grew closer in the tide of war
My bitterness melted away in the time spent with you
I see clearly now that you were only worrying for me
You, the melodist I know
Thank you for whisking me away.
It's been a while since I've seen you but when I return,
The young lord will surely tell you he'll never leave you alone again
Wait for me Tear
I love you

I remember when I first met you
The handsome lord who changed my life
I stole you away from your kingdom, into a dangerous land
I was determined to protect you, the hero I know
I couldn't protect you from the darkness, from the pain
You were so brave, you the hero I know

But you were such a child
You only thought about yourself. If only you'd seen that
If only I'd prevented the travesty you'd endure
Why couldn't the soldier protect her lord?

And yet, despite all things, we grew closer together
I saw the naïve boy grow into an honorable man
I sometimes felt you were leaving me behind, but,
Now I truly know how that feels, losing the hero I know
I'm so glad I met you
I miss you more than anyone, even my brother
If I ever see you again, I'll never let you go
And at last I can tell you Luke,
Just how much I love you
A poem written from the perspective of Luke and mirrored by Tear.
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Lori849 Jul 21, 2012  Student Digital Artist
4NationFury Jul 22, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you! :)
KingAtticus Aug 4, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Very nice. I like how you took both perspectives but still kept the same stanza structure for each of them.
4NationFury Aug 4, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks. It was a lot of fun to write.
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